2019/11/5

We learn how to make brochure this day.Our team made brochure in our website but we think we should make another one because it's too short and There's too few information there. We should put more information that the readers can understand what we want to say more with the writings.
Title  
Introduction 
Hook   1-2 sentences
Backgrounds  3-8 sentences
Thesis statement  1 sentences
Body 1 reason 1 detail   change detail with the opinion of the audience　　3 paragraphs
2  reason 2      same
3  reason 3        same
Conclusion     
Summary  1-3 sentences
Conclusion  5-8
Limitation  1-3 sentences
References
Mr.Paterson said this is the most basic writing form.He said that thesis statement is one of the most important sentences so we should think more about this sentence.My part is body 3 and summary,conclusion. For body 3 I don't have 3 reasons so I should think and add one more reason in the slide too.For conclusion part we need 5-8 sentences so If we need we should add more solution for the class in the slide too.

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